OUGD502 - SB2 - PPP presentation feedback

 After presenting our ideas, we received feedback on the ways in which our idea worked and how it could have been improved. In terms of our research, it seems that the concept of our idea was successful. However, the way in which this concept was proposed could have been more specifically improved. One way that this could have been improved, would be to explain how the 'neon jungle' theme would work in the environment it is placed. For example, there was concern over the way in which the concept required darker hallways, so that the lights would be easier to see. Had there been an alternative solution to this issue, then the concept may have come across more strongly to our audience.

In terms of the presentation itself, it seems that the ideas of the concept were successfully communicated to our audience and there was still time left for questions. However, there could have been a more structured approach to the presenting as there were times when we were questioned about certain things that we were unable to back up with evidence. One way that this could be avoided in future would be to look at the project from the audience's point of view and see whether there are flaws in the concept that are likely to be questioned.

At the bottom of the feedback were several points that could be used for future presentations, as a way to thoroughly explain your ideas and the reasons behind the choices made. This was helpful as it gives the opportunity to look at a presentation from the audience's point of view and understand what they may ask.