Wednesday, 21 November 2018

OUGD601 - Tutor feedback 3 - 21/11/18

After discussion with the tutor about the current stage of the essay, we were able to propose several changes to the structure of the essay and how to link these findings with the practical investigation.

Notes

  • add footnotes to the essay
  • switch Pleck's role theory with identity section
  • summary of role theory and identity theory important points
  • aim to summarise each paragraph in order to link different sections
  • does masculinity carry more addictive traits? is it competitive?
  • what health means to people. What are the differences in body and mind?
  • Sexual orientation playing a part in team sports. Are gay men accepted in public sport? 
  • what articles are there about discrimination of gay men in sport or fitness?
  • in the section about products, refer to the materialism research
  • is body positivity about the symbolic or the role?
  • are there men's body positive campaigns and do they work in the same way women's do?
  • health versus body image and body confidence
Practical
  • consider neutral design which avoids stereotypes.
  • could the design differ for several components?
  • could traditional design be hinted in the outcome?

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